Wednesday, October 30, 2013
Monday, October 28, 2013
Last Writing Grade
Work collected on Friday and graded as the last Writing
grade of marking period:
· American Dream Chart
· Thesis statement development organizer
· Race/Disability organizer
· Gender organizer
· Pre-writing organizer
· RST Source packet (marked up, highlighted, tables filled out)
Thursday, October 24, 2013
I must say....
Now that "Allegiant" has come out, you can get psyched for your reading pleasure: "The Book Thief" by Marcus Zusak. The book is brilliant and I keep rereading its brilliance. This movie comes out in a few weeks and one can only hope the movie matches it. However, the narrator of the book is far more intriguing than the narrator of the film. Check it out. Then tell me how you feel about it.
Tuesday, October 22, 2013
Opportunity to Improve Upon Your Book Test
Of Mice and
Men
Directions:
- If you are unhappy with your book test grade, this grade will be averaged with the book test grade.
- In order to better communicate your understanding of the novella, you must choose one of the two response options below.
- Your responses must be typed and emailed to me at: edrosdick@mahwah.k12.nj.us.
- Received by midnight Monday, October 28.
- They will be checked for plagiarism online.
- You may use your novella and notes to help you write and plan.
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Option #1: Choose three
of the topics and write a minimum of one paragraph in response to each
question. You must use at least one
citation from the text to support each answer.
Option #2: Choose two
of the topics and write a minimum of two paragraphs in response to each
question. You must use at least two
citations from the text to support each answer.
TOPICS:
1. Show how John Steinbeck
explores the complex relationship between George and Lennie. What is Steinbeck trying to prove
about friendship with the characters George and Lennie? You should write about:
What keeps them together, and the difficulties they each have. How they are different from other people on the
farm.
2. Think about
what it means to care for someone. What is John Steinbeck trying to prove
about loyalty? Do you think George’s
decision to shoot Lennie showed that he cared for him? What predictions can you make about George’s
future? How will he feel about his
decision in five years?
3. Many people in
the novel suffer from disappointment. What is John Steinbeck trying to prove
about disappointment in the 1930s? Choose
any three of the following characters and discuss what reasons they have to be
disappointed about their lives: Crooks, Curley, George, Candy, and Curley’s
wife.
4. What is the
connection between Carlson shooting Candy’s dog and George shooting
Lennie? What is the parallel between the two scenes?
5. Loneliness is
a topics found throughout Of Mice and Men. Choose one character and explain how
loneliness affects the character’s actions and choices throughout the
novel. What is Steinbeck saying loneliness can do to people?
**Flip
over to see the rubric you will be graded upon**
SKILL
AREA
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5
Excellent
90-100
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4
Strong
80-90
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3
Adequate
70-80
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2
Fair
60-70
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1
Weak
50-60
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Understanding &Interpretation: the extent to which the writing exhibits sound understanding, interpretation, and/or analysis of literature and writing task |
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Monday, October 21, 2013
Friday, October 18, 2013
Tuesday's Book Test
35 Multiple choice
Text comprehension ch. 3-6
Characters (from entire book)
Literary Elements
Text comprehension ch. 3-6
Characters (from entire book)
- Lennie
- George
- Candy
- Carlson
- Slim
- Curley
- Curley's Wife
- Crooks
- personification
- simile
- metaphor
- onomatopoeia
Literary Elements
- theme
- foreshadowing
- conflict
- setting
- reverent
- imperious
- bewildered
- complacent
- morose
- shuffle
- mollify
- reprehensible
- derogatory
Monday, October 14, 2013
Vocabulary in Practice and Context
Eva had to
come clean. There was no way around
it. Blaming Grant Rice for the crime
would have been reprehensible. Even though she and Grant had always been aloof towards each other, she knew it
was the brave decision. Kicking the door
of the apartment and throwing a hissy fit, Eva’s mom saw that she was filled
with apprehension about the
life-changing decision only she could make.
On the day
of the trial, Eva sat in the witness chair.
The air was so tense it could have been cut with a knife. “What did you see next?” Everyone—the lawyers, the witnesses, the
jury—waited for her words raptly. She looked here. Then she looked there. She averted
her eyes from everyone.
“Paco did
it.”
The
next day, Eva hurried to school. Unlucky
for her, the gang was waiting for her.
Filled with scorn for her
betrayal, they jumped her. As they
trapped her against the fence, Eva cowered
away from their kicks and punches. They
told her that they disowned her, as did her dad. He was so crestfallen with her decision to betray their race that he didn’t
want to speak to her anymore.
Soon
after, Eva stayed after school to talk to Miss Gruwell. Miss Gruwell was happy and receptive towards Eva—especially
because she had done the right thing.
When Sindy came in, she offered to share her makeup with Eva. Miss Gruwell, entranced by the scene unfolding before her, was content to see the
girls reverently regarding each
other’s race and color. They sure had come a long way!
1. Reprehensible:
adjective; deserving of scolding.
Curley’s attack of Lennie when he wasn’t even paying attention is an
action for which he should be admonished.
Antonyms include admired, honored.
2. Receptive:
adjective; approachable and friendly.
Lucky for George and Lennie, Candy was receptive to their arrival. The boss, on the other hand, was a bit
hostile to their late arrival. Antonyms:
hostile, aggressive.
3. Entranced: adjective;
spellbound, deep in thought. Lennie was
entranced by dreams of the farm when Curley brutally attacked him. Rapt is a synonym.
4. Raptly: see:
entranced. While George crunched the
numbers for the purchase of the farm, Candy watched raptly.
5. Reverently: adverb;
respectfully. Related words include
revere. A reverend (pastor of a church)
is someone who should be treated reverently for his moral code of conduct.
6. Cower: verb;
to shrink and shy away from. If an
animal is from an abusive background, it may cower when you raise your hand to
pet it. In fear, it cowers away from
you…even if you don’t plan on hurting it.
7. Aloof: adjective;
distant and unfriendly. An aloof person will most often keep to
themselves and avoid conversations.
Antonyms: friendly.
8. Apprehension: noun;
worry, dread, concern. This is a strange
noun because it is abstract. You
approach new situations with apprehension; you are filled with apprehension. People’s faces can also have a look of
apprehension if they are fearful.
9. Scorn: noun;
ridicule, contempt. Antonym:
admiration. Most of the ranch hands
treat Crooks with scorn because of his color.
10. Avert: verb;
turn away from, avoid. We sometimes get
caught in a lie. When approached with
the truth, a liar may avert their eyes and avoid making eye contact because
they know they were wrong.
11. Crestfallen:
adjective; depressed and disappointed.
Anytime Lennie does something wrong and George threatens to take away
his future rabbits, Lennie becomes crestfallen.
“I’m going to the store with Paco and there’s nothing you
can do about it,” retorted Eva, storming out of her house after a fight
with her mother, unaware of the vicious attack soon to follow. Night had fallen quickly and now, quick
pick-pocketers and sluggish beggars lined the streets as if they were
watching a parade…It was no time to be out in Long Beach.
“BAM BAM BAM!” Gunshots
echoed through the store, penetrating the tension between Eva and Sindy. Witnessing such a tragedy, the girls contorted
their faces at the sight of a blood-soaked floor, surrounding an innocent man
dressed in a mottled sweatshirt and baggy sweat pants. Surprised and bewildered by the shooting,
Eva scuttled to the safety of her car, like a bird to its nest. “The sight of that much blood can make even
the strongest and vicious individuals quiver with nausea and fright,”
Eva whimpered to herself.
Although skeptical at first, it was a pleasant surprise for
Eva to discover that Miss Gruwell would be there to console her in the
end. What a relief!
1. Scuttle: (verb) To run with quick steps. Synonyms for scuttle include scurry, dash,
and scamper.
2. Quiver: (verb) To tremble and shake with slight, quick
motion. When you are cold, you shiver
and you quiver, almost like you are vibrating.
3. Vicious: (adjective) describes someone as being cruel, fierce, and
violent. A synonym for vicious is evil
and is used to describe a person.
However, vicious can also describe something that is unpleasant. For instance, I have a vicious headache that
won’t go away! Or, my vicious plan will
get everyone in trouble. It means
unpleasant and cruel.
4. Sluggish: (adjective) To move slowly or have very little
motion. A snail moves in a sluggish
manner. Or, the students are sluggish
after the long weekend—it is taking them forever to walk from class to
class!
5. Console: (verb) To comfort, cheer up, soothe, and calm. When you console someone, you lesson their
sadness or disappointment. Miss Gruwell
tries to console Eva, or make her feel better, after Eva stormed in the
classroom and yelled at Miss Gruwell about the death of Anne Frank. When a person is consoled, they will mollify
their feelings, anger, or uneasiness.
6. Contort: (verb) To twist or bend out of shape. If there is a bad smell, many will contort
their faces because they are turned off by the smell.
7. Mottled: (adjective) Spotted or blotched in coloring. Synonyms include blotchy, speckled, and
spotty. When a leaf begins to change
colors, it doesn’t happen over night.
Rather, yellow spots will appear on the green leaf. The mottled tree is changing colors—it is
spotty. Eventually, those yellow spots
will cover the entire leaf.
8. Retort: (verb) To reply angrily.
To respond to a comment in a sharp or angry way. When you are using dialogue and describing an
argument between two people, you can write, “That is not what I said,” Justin
retorted. Use retort in place of yell or
snapped.
9. Bewilder: (verb) To confuse or puzzle someone. For instance, it bewildered me that students
only socialized with their own racial group in Freedom Writers. I didn’t
get it at first. Therefore, it
bewildered me.
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